TLC by Chrouya
Script:	 etherpad
Workraw: PhotoKano 01 (480p)

1
Another great performance from the top-tier,famous Arisu-san!
Another great performance from the spectacular top-tier cosplayer, Arisu-san!
{I'd change the word famous into something like popular or spectacular. Also contains the word cosplayer}

4
One... May I take one photo of you?
May I... May I take one photo of you?
{I'd liberally change this into a stutter convention}

12
...{check}!
... Impact!

16
I felt like I had encountered something that would make me change.
I felt like I had encountered something that would change my whole life. 
{spicing it up a bit due to "jibun wo kaeru"}

31
I met Kano-chan daily at our club activities,
I see Kano-chan daily during club activities,
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but I didn't see you during the whole time.
but I didn't get to see you at all.
{this is just my kind of suggestion}

35
Dad bought a new one so I got his old one.
Dad's going to buy a new one so I got his old one.
{present/futurum}

36
Wow, that's great!
Woah, awesome! A real camera!
{you're forgetting something here}

54
It {\i1}was{\i0} her! Morning, Haruka!
There you are! Morning, Haruka!

70
You have to finish it by around the Bon festival, right?
You have to finish it at least before the Bon festival.
{slight warning}

71
I believe so too.
I hope so too.
{I think this works better}

87
Hey, hey, let's take a test shot!
Hey, hey, let's take some test shots!
{I'd make this plural}

153
Huh, Nodoka? What now?
Huh, Nonoka? What now?

159
Well, how about Bili from billiards?
Well, how about Billy from billiards?
160
Or Ere from the electric guitar you quit after playing for three weeks?
Or Elly from the electric guitar you quit after playing for three weeks?
{make him feel miserable!}

169
But you've forgotten to take some fundamental ones?
But you've forgotten to take some fundamental ones.

185
Don't make the models ask you to shoot them.
To make models ask you to shoot them... I'm impressed.
{yaruna == yaru ne "impressive/well done", not the negative of yaru in this intonation}

191
You didn't notice?
You didn't even notice, did you?

217
His nickname is Low-Angle Nakagawa.
His nickname is Low-Angle Nakagawa. Next.
{missing tsugi}

225
I believe you agree.
Don't you agree?

259
To change the air, obviously.
To take a breather, what else?
{I think they have the same entrance if the room is split like that}

265
Don't hang out with such a dubious club as this!
Don't put us in the same category as this dubious club!
{this is a common construction}

274
Whatever Murotoyaki-sama says,
Whatever you or Muroto says,
{kisama = you, referring to the photo club prez}
{muroto = aki muroto, the student council prez}

335
Can I say something?
Can I take my leave now?
{itte depends on kanji and intonation. so in this case, it's from iku, which means to go}

SIGNS
22:06
克己: Self-control

6:48
Kikuma River
The nature is precious.
Treasure it.
<< 8.3km to the sea

7:16
新学期目標
Goals for the new semester

7:45 
現代国語
Modern Japanese

13:06
写真部全員集合せよ!
Everyone from the Photography Club gather up!

13:46
今日の目標
死角をねらえ！
Today's goals
- Aim for the blind spots!